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Vision
I can easily tell what you're trying to get at here, a hot red space scene. It's really beautiful and the color is intense. It kinda makes me sad, because it feels nostalgic to me, so 4 stars
Originality
I usually rate this low, but I havn't seen something that has given me this affect yet, so i'll give it 4 stars
technique
I enjoy the reflection of the light and colors together, it seems so dark..yet so light.
Impact
the overall impact is 4 stars
Ok, the General Piece looks very good.
You did really manage to let it look hot, because that's what you where aiming for I would say good job!
The texture on the planet is well done, and the lower moons /planets are perfectly shadowed.
But, there are a few thing that could have been better....
First of, the shadow on the main planet is larger on the left then on the right, while the sun is in the middle. While this is not a very important something it still counts for the image as a whole.
Next off, it's empty!
When I look at this piece I can see your skill and wonder why you left the lower half of the scene empty, you could've added almost anything there. It does make the picture a bit more calm, but a close up from an ice-planet for example would've given the most spectacular contrast.
Then I would like to point out some realism, the lowest moon, that just hangs there, does it orbit the star?
Maybe it orbits the moon of the big planet. but that already has a moon orbiting a moon... Is that even possible, so far as I know it is not.....
But all the possible improvements aside this is still a beautiful piece of space are, worth faving, commenting and watching.
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